I saw her ...
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| © Kaz Watanabe |
If I tell you Jim
what I saw today
would you be excited
and breath in & sway
If I say, I saw
a girl in the drizzle
the time when stopped
and magnified in the mizzle
If I say, she looked
like, a droplet of dew
like an angel in this world
born anew
born anew
so perfect, in a dress
of cherry red & white, with
browns in her tress
Her skin like a baby's
her eyes like a pearl
her lips almost spread in
a soft pinkish curl
If I tell you Jim
how my heart then pounded
would you check on my left
to see if it has grounded
If I say, I saw
a girl who I knew
a few years ago, when
she called me her beau
If I say, she looked
like, a part of a dream
for she stayed a moment
then vanished with a gleam
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- This poem was written by an imaginary boy for an imaginary girl. :)
Ahaan.. imaginary? ;) Quite some imagination, that is. I always like your poems so much, and this one's just like that.. lovely, and different again. :)
ReplyDeleteAhem ahem, my imagination runs a marathon sometimes. ;) I have a lot of time for imaginations like these, you see. (Pat on the back) :P Okay, I am going to shut up.
DeleteThanks for the lovely comment Ashna. :D
Wow! I read it twice!
ReplyDeleteLovely words used.. and what imagination..!! (if it really was imagination :p)
Read such a nice poem after quite long ;)
Thank you Saloni, you really read twice? :D WOW!! :')
DeleteHey I love this poem! It's so cute :) Just love how it rhymes in certain places! :)
ReplyDeleteBTW is it reeeaaalllyyy imagination that DROVE you write this poem? :D
Thank you AaeKay. And hehe, umm..what drove me to write it wasn't complete imaginationnn, but the PS still holds true :P ;)
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