55 Fiction #3- Waiting for Cheetos



'Hey champion, hungry? Want something?', asked Andrew's dad, crouching down in that busy corridor.
He nodded without saying 'Cheetos and Twinkies'.

‘Okay, don’t go anywhere. I’ll be back in a jiffy.’

Five minutes later, out of the courtroom herself, his mom dragged him to the car and he could only say, ‘But mommy… daddy… ’

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P.S: This was an out of the blue idea and I would love to know how did you find it? Do leave a comment ;)
P.P.S: I missed writing fiction. 

Comments

  1. This is so awesome! <3
    It's emotional, a little sad, meaningful, tells a whole story and is essentially 'complete'. :')

    I wasn't much of a 55 Fiction fan, but considering how I am a fan of your writing, I had to love this too! ^_^ HOW do you write so good? :D

    Please keep writing! Awesome people love it ;)

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    1. Thank You so much Ashna, you always glorify my simple posts. I'm so happy to have a reader like you ^_^

      Yep, I intend to keep on with it. And most importantly, I hope to write more fiction :)

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  2. Waahh..!! Waah..!! This Is Aweosme..!! In thins little work of fiction you have said everything..!! :D :)
    Totally Super..!! :D

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    1. Thanks a lot brother. Awesome people like you make it awesome :)

      P.S: Did I officially welcome you to the blog? I guess not. Well, I'll do it now. A very warm welcome to the blog Aayush :)

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  3. Wow!
    This was so so good! Out of the blue idea? I must say, these ideas are generally the best ones. :D Touchy. Loved it. :)

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    1. Yeah, I totally agree. I have been thinking about writing a 55 fiction and I wasn't getting any ideas. Then, just like that I got this and since I was inspired by your own posts, I just penned(typed) it down ;)

      Thank you SrishTi.

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    2. Glad to know that I (I mean my posts) can inspire some :D

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  4. Hello there! :D

    Something for you here:
    http://srishkuk.blogspot.in/2013/12/happiness-is.html

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    1. Checked and commented. Thank you SrishTi :)

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